Thursday, February 24, 2011
Music is time consuming
Many people always have the dream to be a pop artist. but the sacrifices are blind to them. They don't know the trials and tribulations they go through. they barely see their family, in a different city every night barely any sleep it gets to you after awhile. Everytime a pop artist gets bustd with dugs i don't look away i understand why. All that stress gets hard and since you can't see your family they grow away from you and you lose them. Im not saying don't pursue your dreams beacuse i want to be a hip-hop artist. But be prepared for the hardships and see if you really can handle all of it
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Need to write more. Need to take time to proofread. You lack correct punctuation, and you have run on sentences.
ReplyDeleteFor instance you didn't capitalize "but" in your second sentence. You know that you should. Even in blogs, we need to use grammar rules. You plan to go to college. You'll be expected to use standard English, not texting English.
You have many problems here: They don't know the trials and tribulations they go through. they barely see their family, in a different city every night barely any sleep it gets to you after awhile.
Correct Version: They don't know the trials and tribulations they go through. They barely see their family. They are in a different city every night, barely getting any sleep. It gets to you after awhile.